Day 13. Review your novel, as if it’s already written, and you’re a famous author. Give it a bad review

The narrative started pretty clear and fluid, but since the fourth chapter the quality decreased leaving disconnected paragraphs and sloppy ideas which difficulted the reading flow.

Some characters lack of development and don’t have an outstanding personality that differentiated them enough, plus most of them were nameless even if they were, at first sight, an important part of the story.

What concern of the genre, the abilities lack of originality and the settings are not enough described to create a true image in my mind.