jueves, 22 de diciembre de 2016

Day 11. Write one page synopsis of your story

For years nine breeds lived in peace and independence knowing a little about the others; everyone of them centered their own life to take care of the place in which they born and satisfied the desires of their elements.

In the north, where the River of Fire solidifies, the Children of the Fire you could find; at the northeast the Healers washed themselves on the Spring from the thawing; in the east the Children of the Water tamed the Crystal Falls; in the southeast, where the darkest forest loses you, the Dream Hunters were found; from the south the wind flow took care of you thanks to the Children of the Wind; from the southwest the Ferals were running free; going to the west the trees guided you to the Children of the Earth; at the northwest the Shields lived in the Ice Caves; and in the center the Bones watched.

The individuality began to change when the Ferals and the Children of the Earth started an exchange, the other breeds felt curious and, some, accepted the idea so they tried. In almost  ten years the breeds knew each other’s habits and lifestyle; however, as much as the knowledge grew, the jealousy did as well when some breeds realized their own lacking and the richness from others.

The War between the breeds started. For more than thirty years they killed each other, with some peaceful ones running away from the conflicts, until the new menace was foresaw for the Dream Hunters forcing them to hide between their woods.

When the Magicless came it was too late for the breeds. Those humans appeared with the only desire and objective to take all the land and subjugated the first men there. With their destructive weapons, their inexcusable lack of respect for the nature and their own laws, they vanished the Dream Hunters. Then, one by one, tamed the breeds, forcing them to hide or to die.

Only after one hundred and sixteen years later, the race for the search of the relics started. The nine relics were the weapons created for the war of the breeds, those ancient weapons increased the power of the bearer so they were an unique object the Magicless wanted.

While the Magicless lost their time and power looking for those, two Antiques took the challenge to free the breeds and safe them. Enduring the pain the Magicless provoked in the last leader of the Children of the Wind, learning the atrocities the Magicless did and do to the breeds, discovering the origin of a half-breed, making alliances with the surviving breeds and fighting in a world full of magic, the new heroes will live an adventure without turning back.


Follow the four youngsters who will start a revolution against the thieves of their past. Mynthae was taken from his home to be converted in a puppet and warrior for the Magicless while forcing him to break his people rules; Emisya is half Magicless and half Antique without knowledge of the reality with the breeds but full of curiosity about their past; Vonaxie is from the last annihilated breed, the Bones, so he’ll help them while looking for his revenge at the same time that fulfill his thirst for knowledge; and Jhuwen, a Shield expelled from his village who spent his time killing both Magicless and Antiques owned by Magicless.

1 comentario:

  1. Amo la frase del segundo párrafo, siempre que la leo me acuerdo del mapa y cómo empezó todo~
    Me encanta este resumen y más lo último aunque me sorprendió ver ahí a Jhuwen porque creí que sería otra personita ojos de cabra en esa redacción (aún así, Jhuwen es genial *U*)

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